We met with Sharon and Marianne, to show them what we had done so far with the video, and to get feedback on anything they wanted changing, as well as suggestions for improvement.
We agreed that we need a new voiceover, and arranged for this to be done on Friday.
They suggested less shots of the cake, but we discussed how the shots were useful gestures to the community groups so we would keep a few.
They liked the shots of people’s expressions, and the interaction between students and visitors, so encouraged us to focus on these.
They agreed we needed to change the original music track which was the one used for the original Tetley Feast opening video.